Life in seventeen syllables
Brr indeed! Lovely post-solstice haiku, Doris. Only one suggestion if you don't mind: save a syllable and leave out "the." Haiku doesn't actually have to be exactly 17 syllables or a rigid 5/7/5 format. It's more powerful with fewer words. Stay warm!
Thank you. It is a cold night, but so beautiful. *Smile*
Cold nights offer the best views, I think. Even the Vegas Strip looks more crystal clear on a cold night. But I'll take your view over the Strip anytime.
Things are so clear on nights like that. Thanks for stopping by and I do remember the Strip...not my favorite place either. Doris
Love the photo an the sentiment.
Thank you S J, you made my day.