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Friday, August 9, 2013

Waters Rise

Soft rain - waters rise
Pay attention - time passes
Clouds roll - moving on.

Photo and text copyright 2013 by Doris McCraw

4 comments:

  1. hmmm.....I like this Doris. Will have to play with it a little myself. Thanks!

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    1. Thank you Sherry. The experimentation is a lot of fun. I never would have thought I would be having such fun writing poetry.

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  2. What a fine example of an experimental poem, Dori! Reading left-right, or top-down, it works so well.

    I've read about the flash floods in CO Springs. I do hope you're not involved!

    Carol

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    1. Thank you Carol.I had tried something similar a few years back and thought it might work with the haiku form. (Who knew I would be writing poetry) No the flooding is not in my area, but with the tourism job, I am dealing the the aftermath quite a bit.

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