I love that last line especially--it roots the haiku in place. Haiku were originally epigraphs for longer poems, a brief sort of stage setting if you were describing time and place, very much rooted in concrete details of the moment and not abstract at all. Your last line honors that heritage.
I love that last line especially--it roots the haiku in place. Haiku were originally epigraphs for longer poems, a brief sort of stage setting if you were describing time and place, very much rooted in concrete details of the moment and not abstract at all. Your last line honors that heritage.
ReplyDeleteThank you Susan. I so appreciate your support and comments. They mean a lot.
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